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Strange Points of View

8/2/2026

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More and more often of late, a story demands that I crawl into the mind of something,  or someone, very ‘other’. It’s taken me a number of years to become confident enough to delve into minds that are in-human. Sure, I’ve written stories, long and short, from the perspectives of zombies, elves, witches and fairies but, I didn’t find inhabiting those characters difficult as they’re all very human. To increase their ‘otherness’, I added non-human types of cultural, spiritual or behavioural elements to their character. And, sometimes, magic—because magic always defines a character as special.
 
The first, non-human-type character I wrote was a mythical cat. A week or so back a friend commented that cats are stupid little demons in fur coats with rebellious toddler energy—they also operate in stealth mode. Having shared a house with many a cat, they're familiar beasties whose interests include; sleeping, eating, cuddling, prowling and hunting (and shagging for the unfixed). But every cat has its own strange foibles. Heidi, the tabby of my childhood, hated it when I coughed. Once, when I was sick in bed and in the midst of a coughing fit, she unfurled from her spot at my feet, marched up my body and bit me on the nose, she then returned to her spot, curled up and went back to sleep. Evil Eddie, the farm tabby, liked to help muster the sheep. He also took delight in hiding behind doors so he could leap out and shred our legs when we walked past...but his favourite trick was to take swipes at the dogs from the safety of the hammock. Evil Eddie was a prolific hunter and dragged home a multitude of rats, rabbits and possums, and, to my embarrassment, a neighbour’s chickens. So, all that to say that writing from the point of view of a cat is something that I’m comfortable with. But for several years, that’s as deep into the ‘other’ that I was willing, or able, to go. Until…I started writing the Ghost Assassins of Bijou novellas.
 
Some of the most important characters in those manuscripts are belosa—cuttlefish-like creatures that have chosen to leave their ocean home to partner with a ghost assassin and travel the universe. I’m a marine biologist by trade and I’ve spent many, many years in, on and around the sea. Despite that, I’ve had exactly one experience of snorkelling with cuttlefish (which was super cool and is a memory I treasure). So, these aren’t characters that I’m at all familiar with. The scientist in me rose to the challenge and I plunged into research mode. I read a multitude of papers about cuttlefish anatomy, perception, behaviour and intelligence. Once I’d inhaled enough to give me a starting place, I went on to develop complex individual characters based on species-appropriate motivations, a set of cultural mores to guide them and a non-homogenous society. Then, I added another layer…but spoilers!
 
While writing Outer Death (my almost-complete novel-in-flash), I’ve inhabited several strange and difficult points of view. One of the hardest for me was occupying the mind of a racist, misogynistic billionaire. It not only made me physically uncomfortable but, I found it harder to think like that man than to imagine myself as a belosa. Two of the most recent stories I’ve written for Outer Death, feature very different but less traumatising perspectives. The first is written from the hive-mind of fungi. The second from a singular evolved octopus, who encounters the fungi from the previous story. As I did for the belosa, I returned to the basic principles of what drives each species and what limits them achieving their goals. From there, I built the characters, layering in intelligence and adding eccentricities. In both cases, I’m delighted with the result. Is it weird that I better understand the motivations of a fungus than a billionaire bent on accumulating wealth at the cost of the planet?
 
Other tricks I use express a species otherness are by using words and phrases in ways that twist our perceptions and by asking a myraid of ‘what if’ questions. For a marine species, what if the seafloor doesn’t rise, but the sea surface presses down? What if octopuses think in base-8 and use tentacles as a measure of both time and distance? What if fungi used their vast mycelial network to share eons of knowledge and know-how to protect earth from the human-plague? What if microbial mats on the deep-ocean floor have no concept of time? What if it’s not me writing this blog, but it’s the collective consciousness of the bacteria that occupy this moving bag of meat and bones? Oops, I've circled back to zombies.
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Finding a Character's Voice

4/1/2025

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What makes each character in a story shine? In part, it’s their voice. Voice is how characters wield dialogue, and it should be supported by the narrative. When reading a character’s internal thoughts or dialogue, we should recognise them. Their voice should be distinct not only from the other characters, but also from the author’s voice. 

When faced with someone playing their music too loud, one character says, “Would you mind turning that down a little please?” While a different character shouts, “If you don’t turn that shit down right now, I’ll fucking do it for you!” Straight away, we can differentiate the characters and not only surmise something about each of them but also about their relationship with the person playing the music. These characters employ their dialogue in very different ways — one polite, the other aggressive.

It's obvious that a cleaner on a generational spaceship woken from cryo-sleep to clean up after a bloody coup will speak in a very different way to a witch offering a potion to a lovelorn knight. The differences will exceed their locations, languages and accents. Almost everything will be different: the tone, urgency and rhythm of their speech; the vocabulary they use; the structure of their sentences. But what if it’s two cleaners woken from cryo-sleep? How can their voices be distinct?

The background of a character should be reflected in their voice. Their age, gender, culture, and education will influence their word choice. Think about the way older men often interrupt and speak over young women. The vocabulary of working-class people shouldn’t be simplified or dumbed down — but it should be used differently to upper management and company owners. In the same way, racist tropes should be avoided. It’s enough to say ‘She spoke with a French accent’, rather than…ow you say?…err…to write in ze way she en fait speaks…bah dis donc!

The temperament of a character influences not only the words they use, but the way they deliver those words. When they get angry do they shout and annunciate every single word? Perhaps they stutter when nervous or afraid? Much is revealed about a character by their tone of voice — are they arrogant or timid by nature? What happens when a character finds themselves outside their comfort zone? Do they talk more or go quiet? Are their sentences shorter or do their sentences trail off to silence? All of this tells us something about the character and sets them apart from the crowd.

Turns of phrase, tics, and slang are very effective in distinguishing characters, but they should be used judiciously and not over laboured. The same applies to habitually mispronouncing words. I once had a conversation with a woman who talked about visiting the ‘gully’ on an airplane, it took me a while to figure out she meant the ‘galley’. The same woman was someone who if a sentence only needed ten words, then she’d use thirty. If I was to write her as a character, the obvious foil to her verbosity would be to have a character who only spoke in clipped sentences, grunted or used gruff words.

Describing a character’s body language through narrative is another way of distinguishing their voice. Do their emotions play out on their face or are they unreadable? How a character walks and moves can tell us a lot about them and can differentiate them from other similar characters. Another physical attribute that distinguishes a character is their speaking voice. Is it low or high-pitched, raspy, booming or soft? The discordance of a character’s speaking voice being at odds with their physical appearance creates a unique and memorable character.
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Every character, even minor ones, should have their own voice. One of the best ways to research character’s voices is to people watch. Sit in a café or a park or wherever people congregate and pay active attention to the conversations around you. Take notes.
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Memory, Self and Character Arcs

10/1/2024

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One of my recent characters was the recipient of the memories of others. She had trouble distinguishing her own memories from those that weren’t her own. At times, she questioned who she was and struggled with her new identity.

So, to inform my writing, I spent some time reading and thinking about memory and the self. 
We rely heavily on our memories to tell us who we are, but there are some problems with that. Memories aren’t reliable and even if we think they are, they can only tell us who we were.

[Disclaimer: None of my musings consider the impact of brain injuries or disease on a person’s memory and sense of self. While both of those exist in my family, the following is based on my personal experience with my own memories and what they mean to my sense of self.]

I’ve got clear memories of events from my childhood that I just didn’t experience. What I actually have of those events are photographs and stories told over and over by my parents. So, I know that, for me, all it takes to construct a false memory is a visual cue and a good story.

At the other end of my memory spectrum, I’ve got massive gaps. I ran into a friend a while ago and they were recounting something we’d shared that had a profound impact on their life. I have zero recollection of whatever it was, even now after they reminded me…it’s a gigantic black hole. It was awful, and it hurt their feelings that I couldn’t remember.

I think because I’m a visual learner unless there’s a visual reminder, or a powerful emotional connection to the moment, event or activity, then it just doesn’t stick. So, if I’m the just sum of my memories then, at best, I’m a patchwork of half-truths and gaping holes. Surely, I’m more than that?

One thing I’m certain of is that I’ve occupied this body through everything. I know it well and can point to every scar and tell you where I was and what happened. This body hasn’t always served me well—my periods were debilitating, and the night-sweats of perimenopause made me question my will to live—but it’s mine. Isn’t it?

It turns out it’s not. By this point in my life, every cell I was born with has been replaced around eight times. This is not the same body that learned to swim in a tidal channel on the mudflats. It’s not the same body that lost its virginity on a picnic blanket under a grapefruit tree. It’s not even the same body that danced under a glacier in Antarctica. I don’t possess the same body I was born into, but the elements remain.

So, am I just a bunch of memories that can’t be trusted and a body that’s changed beyond recognition? Of course not. I’m so much more.

I’m also the product of an accident of birth. Born into a skin, culture, country and time that affords me advantages so many others don’t have. But I’m of a sex that came with hidden challenges. I’m driven by ever-changing goals, fuelled by unstable emotions, and a dynamic set of beliefs and values. I’m the forever-fluid shape of all of those things and more—a package consisting of constant change and potential.

Human beings, along with all living beings, are not static. Even rocks change over time!

How does this apply to writing? 

The characters we write should change across the trajectory of even the shortest story. Their memories should be questionable and their bodies and minds messy with scars both literal and metaphorical.

Newton’s Third Law of Motion states that for every action, there must be an equal and opposite reaction. This principle is useful in developing characters. If a character experiences great pain, then they should become averse to painful situations. If a character finds unbridled joy, then they must also suffer the depths of despair. We need to write these reactions into the character to show how they evolve.

We must allow our characters to grow, or even diminish. Not everyone becomes a better person. Some people thrive in adversity, while others collapse. Our characters should question themselves. What they need from the world should change as the story progresses. The character in the first sentence, should not be the same as the character in the last sentence and we should understand why.
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My character, the one who spawned this existential exploration of self, changed enormously over the arc of the story. She had to. Even though she struggles to manage the multitude of ‘other’ memories, she’s retained her sense of self. At the end of the story, she’s both physically and mentally altered and is still grappling with those changes. She's not a better person, nor is she worse but she's different. Despite the changes, she remains unique and distinct from the other characters, and most important, we still recognise her. 
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