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Strange Points of View

8/2/2026

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More and more often of late, a story demands that I crawl into the mind of something,  or someone, very ‘other’. It’s taken me a number of years to become confident enough to delve into minds that are in-human. Sure, I’ve written stories, long and short, from the perspectives of zombies, elves, witches and fairies but, I didn’t find inhabiting those characters difficult as they’re all very human. To increase their ‘otherness’, I added non-human types of cultural, spiritual or behavioural elements to their character. And, sometimes, magic—because magic always defines a character as special.
 
The first, non-human-type character I wrote was a mythical cat. A week or so back a friend commented that cats are stupid little demons in fur coats with rebellious toddler energy—they also operate in stealth mode. Having shared a house with many a cat, they're familiar beasties whose interests include; sleeping, eating, cuddling, prowling and hunting (and shagging for the unfixed). But every cat has its own strange foibles. Heidi, the tabby of my childhood, hated it when I coughed. Once, when I was sick in bed and in the midst of a coughing fit, she unfurled from her spot at my feet, marched up my body and bit me on the nose, she then returned to her spot, curled up and went back to sleep. Evil Eddie, the farm tabby, liked to help muster the sheep. He also took delight in hiding behind doors so he could leap out and shred our legs when we walked past...but his favourite trick was to take swipes at the dogs from the safety of the hammock. Evil Eddie was a prolific hunter and dragged home a multitude of rats, rabbits and possums, and, to my embarrassment, a neighbour’s chickens. So, all that to say that writing from the point of view of a cat is something that I’m comfortable with. But for several years, that’s as deep into the ‘other’ that I was willing, or able, to go. Until…I started writing the Ghost Assassins of Bijou novellas.
 
Some of the most important characters in those manuscripts are belosa—cuttlefish-like creatures that have chosen to leave their ocean home to partner with a ghost assassin and travel the universe. I’m a marine biologist by trade and I’ve spent many, many years in, on and around the sea. Despite that, I’ve had exactly one experience of snorkelling with cuttlefish (which was super cool and is a memory I treasure). So, these aren’t characters that I’m at all familiar with. The scientist in me rose to the challenge and I plunged into research mode. I read a multitude of papers about cuttlefish anatomy, perception, behaviour and intelligence. Once I’d inhaled enough to give me a starting place, I went on to develop complex individual characters based on species-appropriate motivations, a set of cultural mores to guide them and a non-homogenous society. Then, I added another layer…but spoilers!
 
While writing Outer Death (my almost-complete novel-in-flash), I’ve inhabited several strange and difficult points of view. One of the hardest for me was occupying the mind of a racist, misogynistic billionaire. It not only made me physically uncomfortable but, I found it harder to think like that man than to imagine myself as a belosa. Two of the most recent stories I’ve written for Outer Death, feature very different but less traumatising perspectives. The first is written from the hive-mind of fungi. The second from a singular evolved octopus, who encounters the fungi from the previous story. As I did for the belosa, I returned to the basic principles of what drives each species and what limits them achieving their goals. From there, I built the characters, layering in intelligence and adding eccentricities. In both cases, I’m delighted with the result. Is it weird that I better understand the motivations of a fungus than a billionaire bent on accumulating wealth at the cost of the planet?
 
Other tricks I use express a species otherness are by using words and phrases in ways that twist our perceptions and by asking a myraid of ‘what if’ questions. For a marine species, what if the seafloor doesn’t rise, but the sea surface presses down? What if octopuses think in base-8 and use tentacles as a measure of both time and distance? What if fungi used their vast mycelial network to share eons of knowledge and know-how to protect earth from the human-plague? What if microbial mats on the deep-ocean floor have no concept of time? What if it’s not me writing this blog, but it’s the collective consciousness of the bacteria that occupy this moving bag of meat and bones? Oops, I've circled back to zombies.
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Finding a Character's Voice

4/1/2025

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What makes each character in a story shine? In part, it’s their voice. Voice is how characters wield dialogue, and it should be supported by the narrative. When reading a character’s internal thoughts or dialogue, we should recognise them. Their voice should be distinct not only from the other characters, but also from the author’s voice. 

When faced with someone playing their music too loud, one character says, “Would you mind turning that down a little please?” While a different character shouts, “If you don’t turn that shit down right now, I’ll fucking do it for you!” Straight away, we can differentiate the characters and not only surmise something about each of them but also about their relationship with the person playing the music. These characters employ their dialogue in very different ways — one polite, the other aggressive.

It's obvious that a cleaner on a generational spaceship woken from cryo-sleep to clean up after a bloody coup will speak in a very different way to a witch offering a potion to a lovelorn knight. The differences will exceed their locations, languages and accents. Almost everything will be different: the tone, urgency and rhythm of their speech; the vocabulary they use; the structure of their sentences. But what if it’s two cleaners woken from cryo-sleep? How can their voices be distinct?

The background of a character should be reflected in their voice. Their age, gender, culture, and education will influence their word choice. Think about the way older men often interrupt and speak over young women. The vocabulary of working-class people shouldn’t be simplified or dumbed down — but it should be used differently to upper management and company owners. In the same way, racist tropes should be avoided. It’s enough to say ‘She spoke with a French accent’, rather than…ow you say?…err…to write in ze way she en fait speaks…bah dis donc!

The temperament of a character influences not only the words they use, but the way they deliver those words. When they get angry do they shout and annunciate every single word? Perhaps they stutter when nervous or afraid? Much is revealed about a character by their tone of voice — are they arrogant or timid by nature? What happens when a character finds themselves outside their comfort zone? Do they talk more or go quiet? Are their sentences shorter or do their sentences trail off to silence? All of this tells us something about the character and sets them apart from the crowd.

Turns of phrase, tics, and slang are very effective in distinguishing characters, but they should be used judiciously and not over laboured. The same applies to habitually mispronouncing words. I once had a conversation with a woman who talked about visiting the ‘gully’ on an airplane, it took me a while to figure out she meant the ‘galley’. The same woman was someone who if a sentence only needed ten words, then she’d use thirty. If I was to write her as a character, the obvious foil to her verbosity would be to have a character who only spoke in clipped sentences, grunted or used gruff words.

Describing a character’s body language through narrative is another way of distinguishing their voice. Do their emotions play out on their face or are they unreadable? How a character walks and moves can tell us a lot about them and can differentiate them from other similar characters. Another physical attribute that distinguishes a character is their speaking voice. Is it low or high-pitched, raspy, booming or soft? The discordance of a character’s speaking voice being at odds with their physical appearance creates a unique and memorable character.
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Every character, even minor ones, should have their own voice. One of the best ways to research character’s voices is to people watch. Sit in a café or a park or wherever people congregate and pay active attention to the conversations around you. Take notes.
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Advice for New Writers

8/31/2024

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I know what it’s like. You have a book inside you. It’s burning to get out. So, you write it. Your family and your best friend love it. It’s the best story ever written. It’ll be a best-seller and made into a film. A famous actor will play the lead and become your new best friend. You’ll buy a mansion and travel first class. The world will be your oyster…

If only publishers and agents would stop ignoring your emails.
If only publishers and agents would stop rejecting your 185,000-word manuscript.
If only you could afford another $5,000, so the hybrid publisher, who approached you, can publicise it.
If only someone would buy your self-published book with the home-made cover.
 
Where did it all go wrong? You cry.

Probably at the very beginning!
Here’s some lessons I've learned during my writing practice - some the hard way, others through the generous advice of fellow authors.
  1. Join an organisation dedicated to writers. It might be a regional or national group, like Writers Victoria in Australia or New Zealand’s Society of Authors (NZSA). Or maybe a specialised group like SpecFicNZ, for writers of speculative fiction, or HWA, for those who write horror. If that’s too much, see if you can find a local group of writers who meet in person. All of these will provide various levels of support, advice and training to assist you on your writing journey.
  2. Take advantage of in-person and online workshops and seminars to learn about craft and the publishing world. These are also opportunities to make connections with like-minded authors.
  3. Find a critique group. Friends and family don’t want to hurt your feelings or crush your dreams. Other writers will give you honest feedback on all aspects of your writing (grammar, plot, characters, voice etc). This should be a two-way exchange; you help them, they help you. Everyone learns and grows.
  4. Pay for a professional editor. Unless you have mad editing skills, it’s almost impossible to pick up your own mistakes. If you can’t afford to pay, then at the very least, buy a great self-editing guide and work your way through it with rigour. My suggestions are: Mark My Words by Lee Murray and Angela Yuriko Smith, and; Self-Editing For Fiction Writers by Browne and King.
  5. Do your research. This applies to every aspect of your writing life. Research your genre - understand the tropes, expected length, style of cover. Research your market - who’s your audience (age, sex), what makes your story stand out from the crowd. Research agents and publishers who might be interested in your work - read their requirements carefully and follow them to the letter.
 
If you can’t find answers or still have questions, then ask for help from the contacts you’ve made. But and this is important, be respectful of their time. If they say no, be gracious and move on. It’s hard when you don’t know what you don’t know, and we all make mistakes. The trick is to know when to take a pause, set your ego aside and learn.
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